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Theatrics - Pilot

Reviewed by: CediBeMe

A Good Start

The “Theatrics” pilot script features good ideas and a good basis upon which to build a potentially successful series. The script itself, however, is currently more of a learning experience than a finished product. First,

Caprivi

Reviewed by: JimFeliciano

Caprivi

I liked this script. This is a good concept and story in a little-known area of the world. I though the concept was interesting and hit a topical type of story. The story was fair to good. I though the structure was good. You

Headsup

Reviewed by: SiColl007

Okay

Wasn't to sure about this one - had a good twist to the end of it, and that stood out from the rest of the script which came across a little weak. People do have different styles, but I wasn't too sure why we had a 'headsup' at t

Going on a bender...

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Posted by: jaydubbbb

I'll admit it. ; Two screenplays under the belt and I have not seen alot of the classics that you're surely assigned in film school. ; So, Cat on a Hot Tin Roof, Dial M for Murder, The Maltese Falcon, Twelve Angry Men,.....

Re: Congrats Talentville

(The Wild West)

Posted by: Ben Cahan

I was going to turn on the facebook ad to hit the 3000 mark, but I think I'll just let it happen when it happens. ; We're getting there. Ben

Re: No proofreading

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Posted by: hotpen

[quote author=verystudios link=topic=651.msg3717#msg3717 date=1327655640] [quote author=tedcabarga link=topic=651.msg3715#msg3715 date=1327652149] "I am amazed you think a great grammer writer without creativity out weighs a ...

A young wife, accused of her husband's grisly murder, must fight through damning rumors against her and prove she's not "guilty until proven innocent."

A suicidal girl attempts to pull her dysfunctional family back together while battling a potentially deadly disease and a series of mental breakdowns.