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The Worst Days of my Lousy Life
Reviewed by: countclay
A raunchy road trip 
Greetings, I’ll preface by saying I’m in no way a professional or amateur critic so you can take my comments with a grain of salt. To me this feels very much like an early draft. You have some good ideas and you have an idea of where you want to go, but it’s not quite implemented...
Running Water
Reviewed by: Lou Agins
You need to...
First, note that I am only trying to help and I do not do this professionally. That said, you need to have this read by a professional service. The structure is terrible. I know that because I used to write like that until someone showed me the right way. I'm going to be honest, I cou...
Inner City
Reviewed by: James Feliciano
Inner City
Good story. I enjoyed it. You have an interesting philosophical concept that is worth telling a story about. We need more stories that take a whack at Lifeboat Ethics. However, the story needs some work. It really got going at about page 70. You could whack off about 2o to 30 pages f...
Overheard at the Bar & Grill
Woo Hooo! 3 day weekend. oh ya, and God save the queen!
(The Wild West)
Posted 5 hours ago by: Paul Mailhot
It's a long weekend in Canada - Victoria Day. The U.S have anything going on this weekend? ;
Re: The Power of the First and Last Image
(The Screenwriters' Lounge)
Posted 1 day ago by: Neal Barringer
very interesting article. I completely understand the analog. Unfortunately, your screenplay will not get positive feedback if every "word" is not spelled correctly as most reviewe...
Re: The Script Vault
(The Screenwriters' Lounge)
Posted 1 day ago by: John Graham
Thanks Dawn! I registered my screenplay with Script Vault, good customer service, just waiting for the registration number to upload my screenplay.
