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Actual Death Experience

Reviewed by: francis

Fast paced futuristic fantasy/sci fi

A really good writing style makes this script a joy to read. I like your use of descriptions eg 'if heaven had a lobby - this would be it' and 'Paver watches Aignes examine his hand, like an infant discovering his foot'. It is pr

Big Break

Reviewed by: waynet

I usually hate reading RomComs but your logline made it a little interesting....

I'm a Tourist, so I was forced to read your story. I usually don't like to read these kind of stories but sometimes they are good. RomComs are the HARDEST stories to write! You have to have good romance and good comedy. I thoug

"At What Price?"

Reviewed by: Dewhirstp

A solid payoff, but at what price?

This is a generally pleasant and well-intentioned screenplay, exploring environmental issues during a pivotal period of recent Russian history. The characters are particularly solid and well developed (‘Ages’ was a favourite o

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[quote author=hotpen link=topic=742.msg4373#msg4373 date=1329943404] And probably another 10,000 that aren't registered. A screenwriter faces better odds jumping off a cliff. [/quote] How many scripts have you sold this way...

Good as is--straightforward and to-the-point. However, more details could be added regarding the conflict, at your discretion.

A young wife, accused of her husband's grisly murder, must fight through damning rumors against her and prove she's not "guilty until proven innocent."