Total # of Review Ratings: 101
Average Review Rating: 3.76

Ratings: 5

Score: 4.20

THE SILHOUETTE OF ECHO

Short Script • 2 Pages | Drama

Descriptive but not narrative

Posted: Feb 02, 2014

Dear Maria, though I feel totally honored you asked me to read your script, I'm not sure I'm the best person to get it. Young people love short thing - and I'm old, very old ;-)I think I wrote all my doubts in the notes to you script. I hope I haven't been too hard because it was not at all my intention.All the best,  Clara Page by Page Script Notes...TITLE PAGE:Many questions. I read "drama" but then I get only 5 pages. Is it the idea for a longer flick and you are testing how it looks like? Is it for an ad? Is it for...

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Thursdays

Screenplay • 114 Pages | Romance, Suspense/Thriller

Love comedy or thriller?

Posted: Dec 17, 2013

SYNOPSISUSA, present.CALLUM ARGALL, 30, is a rich gay heir. Despite his financial luck, Callum is deadly sick since his birth. His parents tried to genetically engineer his DNA still when he was unborn with an untested procedure hoping they’ll get a super kid. They failed and now Callum is condemned to a weekly treatment to keep his DNA intact. If Callum doesn’t follow it seriously and regularly this cure, he’ll die. Callum does not want anybody to discover this.These cures are extremely expensive and few can afford them: unde...

Ratings: 2

Score: 3.50

QUIET SOUL

Screenplay • 98 Pages | Drama

Make a novel out of it and it will work.

Posted: Nov 21, 2013

SYNOPSIS Henry Brownstone, a philosophy professor, 41 has been left by his woman. He is very sad about it and tries to give a reasonable and philosophical explanation of what happens. The story begins when Henry was 18, attending prep school in Washington DC. At the same time (?) at the Wedge in California, a young BONZE, 13 and young KAREN meet for the first time. Five years later, when Henry is 23, he goes to his professor Mac and discusses about his theses in philosophy. At the same time, Bonze, now 18 asks out for the Homecoming Dance Joy, ...

Ratings: 2

Score: 4.00

Signature

Screenplay • 109 Pages | Suspense/Thriller

With the right adjustments, Signature is a seller.

Posted: Jun 14, 2013

SYNOPSISBellport, Ohio. Present.GAIL MILLER, 25s is a journalist. Her MOTHER, Gail’s last piece of family dies because of cancer, leaving her not just alone but with a mystery unsolved, a mystery that took all of her mother’s energies when she lived: the disappearance of her sister SHANNON about six years before - she went out jogging and never came back. Is Shannon still alive? If yes, where is she? If she’s dead, who killed her and why? Gail, who moved to Chicago for work, moves back to her hometown Bellport, Ohio and starts...

Ratings: 3

Score: 4.67

THE LEGEND OF JOCKO GRAVES

Screenplay • 95 Pages | Drama

Needs serious rewriting.

Posted: Jun 06, 2013

SYNOPSISMassachusetts, 1775.Settlers of the American East Coast after years of resentment towards the British Crown are now ready to fight for their independence. In Charlestown, lives an African-American family, whose father, TOM GRAVES, 30S has left for war together with other militia men, living behind him his wife, NETTIE, 30S and his only son JOCKO, 11. During a British offensive, Jocko’s parents die and the child is rescued by some militia men that find for him an adoptive family: TONY and CUBA, a couple in their 60s. Notwithstandin...

Ratings: 1

Score: 1.00

Modern Family

"The Vocab Bee"

Sitcom • 29 Pages | Comedy

My very first TV script......

Posted: May 30, 2013

Hey, Mike!First of all I want to apologize for my review because I really don't think I qualify for the job. I'm gonna ask Ben to create a separate list for TV shows becaue I think they deserve a specific review skill.I'll give you then my impression, though I don't think they count much. Hope you'll get better reviewer, Best,  Clara I wouldn't write "continued" on each page.I wouldn't underline each scene - you don't in a movie script, but I don't know if you have to like that in a TV script.I would't write three acts,...

Ratings: 2

Score: 4.50

The Trail Blazers

Screenplay • 110 Pages | Drama

With the proper adjustments, this flick could be a winner.

Posted: May 30, 2013

SYNOPSIS Winston Salem, North Carolina, USA. Present. CARLY SKATER PARSONS, 22, is the immature daughter of MARGARET PARSONS with whom she lives, together with her two brothers, STEVEN, 11 and ZACK, 9. Carly is a passionate wrestler, though her mother is not happy with her choice: her husband failed her and their family because of this sport and she doesn’t want to see her daughter following him on the same wrong path. Besides her mother is going through a dire financial moment: she’d really need more help from her daughter. But Car...

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