Screenplay, 110 pages -- 1st draft September 2011
CONCEPT: 8.7
STORY: 8.3
CHARACTER: 7.3
STRUCTURE: 7
DIALOGUE: 6.3
WRITING: 6.7
OVERALL: 7

Synopsis:

A washed up Hollywood swashbuckler stakes all when he seeks real life validation as a war correspondent during the Cuban revolution.

Excerpt from Scriptapalooza Coverage:

‘Errol Flynn - The Rebel’ is a competent screenplay that demonstrates solid writing. Centered on actor Errol Flynn as he deteriorates into obscurity and alcoholism, the script captures an interesting moment in his life. Desperate to rebuild his public image Errol travels to Cuba during the revolution of the 1950’s and rubs shoulders with President Batista AND rebel leader Fidel Castro. Double and triple-crosses follow and the ending proves exciting. The final moments are bittersweet but still manage to nail some irony and humor. Errol is an engrossing (if not sympathetic, more below) protagonist and his journey is undeniably compelling. The secondary characters are interesting as well, specifically the romance between Maria and John. The dialogue is also a big standout in the screenplay because it helps develop the characters discussed above while layering in subtext on a number of fronts including redemption, addiction, friendship, love, loyalty, and betrayal. There are also countless witty and sharp one-liners thanks mostly to Errol. Last, the tone is even and consistent throughout.