I have worked in communications, film and television for over 25 years. Having written four movie scripts (working on the fifth), two novels, and made four short films, I am willing to review and critique your script.
Check out the short film, The AnyTime Boys - https://youtu.be/-sCvXIoMNe0
Other visual material at https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC7fO5cgXkN43Q3lsZ3G-YQg
and https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCIRdDBExB_YKexl_2qxH8Cw
