Immortal
Immortal
Feature Screenplay, 118 pages
Horror, Drama
Posted by Jack Johnstone
Written by Jack Frederick Johnstone
Monsters/AliensMysteryMythicalParanormalSlasher/GoreSupernaturalThrillerViolenceTime Period: 18th- 19th Century | 20th Century | PresentStory Location: USASpecial Effects: Minimal SFXTarget Audience: Adult
Active ✔ PDFWhen a burned out composer rescues a feral but vulnerable vampire from the woods, he makes the choice to bind her immortality to his love which keeps her safe but his career at risk.
Immortal is a gothic horror drama set in Los Angeles, where moonlight, wealth and loneliness hide something ancient and unnatural. At its heart is Eli Lee, a gifted but emotionally fraying composer who, six years earlier, stumbles across a feral vampire in the woods above Hollywood. Her name is Adriana Blakesley: beautiful, chalk-pale, animalistic, blood-soaked, and clearly more frightened than evil. Eli expects to die. Instead, he is approached by Bolter, an ancient vampire who presents him with an impossible choice. Adriana, he says, has suffered for nearly a century. She can only survive if someone loves her endlessly, not as a lover or bride, but as a daughter. Eli agrees, and in doing so binds himself to a life of secrecy, guilt and emotional responsibility he does not fully understand.
Six years later, Eli has turned that impossible decision into a private routine. He lives in a lavish mansion, has built a career in music, and spends his days trying to pass as successful and in control while secretly caring for a vampire who is part wounded child, part supernatural predator. Adriana is no glamorous seductress. She is a traumatised immortal woman who has been regressed and silenced by the man who turned her. She hides under tables from shafts of sunlight, breathes garlic like medicine, clings to Eli’s voice when she is afraid, and brightens whenever he tells her he loves her. Their bond is deeply tender, but it is also unstable. Eli is not her boyfriend, saviour or master. He is, in every meaningful sense, her father. That alone makes the relationship feel fresh and unsettling. It takes the kind of setup audiences expect to become a dark romance and turns it into something stranger, sadder and more emotionally original: a horror story about parenthood, duty and the terrible weight of being responsible for a soul you cannot quite save.
Eli’s secret is also crucial. Adriana believes sunlight can still destroy her. What Eli has never told her is that his love has already altered the rules. The Forbidden Bond has made her truly immortal. Sunlight no longer kills her in the way it once should. The very thing that protects her is also the thing that traps her in endless existence. Eli keeps this from her out of love, fear and cowardice. He tells himself he is sparing her pain. In truth, he is controlling the one thing she would want most: the right to know what she has become. That secret turns the story from a simple “man protects monster” premise into something much richer. Eli is not just Adriana’s caretaker. He is, in a sense, her jailer, and he knows it.
Running parallel to this is Hannah Wilcher, a brittle, obsessive investigator haunted by family history and by damage she does not know how to speak about. Alongside her softer, more sceptical brother Noah, Hannah begins tracking what she believes is the last surviving victim of the infamous vampire Maël Egerton. She does not yet realise that the girl in the old photograph she clings to is living in the Hollywood Hills under Eli’s care. Hannah’s storyline gives the film another emotional spine. She begins as a hunter, someone desperate for proof, control and vindication. But she is not a cliché action heroine. She is bruised, angry, repressed and running on trauma. As the story unfolds, Hannah becomes a mirror to Adriana. One is human and one is monstrous, but both are women marked by violation, silence and damage they carry in their bodies.
The film detonates when Eli prepares to leave for New York for a major audition, hoping to keep his two lives separate for just a little longer. That hope collapses when burglars break into the mansion and Adriana, exposed to human blood for the first time in years, relapses with horrifying force. The attack is not a cool action set piece. It is frightening, ugly and tragic. Adriana feeds, panics, turns on Eli, then recoils in shame when she sees his terror. In the aftermath, the truth about the Bond begins to surface. Eli finally sees, in undeniable terms, that his love is not only keeping Adriana alive. It is keeping her trapped in a state she has never consented to.
At the same time, Hannah closes in, Noah is pulled deeper into the danger, and the emotional architecture of the story starts to shift. No one remains in their neat assigned role. The father becomes compromised. The monster becomes unbearable to pity. The hunter becomes vulnerable.
The film’s real power comes from how completely it refuses easy moral categories.
What makes Immortal stand out in the vampire genre is that it does not strip the monster of horror in order to make her sympathetic. Adriana is genuinely dangerous. She can tear bodies apart, lose control at the scent of blood, unleash a scream that incapacitates her victims, and reduce a peaceful room to panic in seconds. But every act of violence comes with guilt, shame and grief. She is not a fantasy vampire softened for romance. She is a horror creature softened by pain. That distinction matters. The audience is never allowed to forget what she is capable of, yet the screenplay keeps drawing us back to her vulnerability: the way she hides, the way she clings, the way she tries and fails to communicate, the way she punishes herself after feeding. The result is a monster who becomes the film’s emotional centre without ever ceasing to be a monster.
