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Talentville Coverage for Twelve Steps To Paradise - The Fall

by Ben Cahan

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TWELVE STEPS TO HEAVEN is a really interesting premise for a pilot. There is an instant amusing hook to the idea that an angel in the army of Heaven struggles with his disgust of humans and is consequently banished back to earth for “sensitivity training.” However, at first glance, it's hard to tell if this idea can really live through an entire season. There is a lot of potential to develop Rygar into a curmudgeonly, yet amusing lead character. This would make the show much more character-driven, but the writing never quite delivers the necessary details or personality.