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Somewhere Between Good and Evil is a stunning mix between Law Abiding Citizen and Office Space.
The script is a compelling thriller that offers a sharp treatise on survival in the modern, corporate world. The writer nimbly explores this cumbersome topic, while delivering a story that is clean and concise. Furthermore, the script has a great balance of dialogue, action, suspense, sexual tension, and depth of content. While improvements can be made, the script is a thought-provoking case study on a blossoming concern in the modern world.
The concept is the highlight of the script. The writer obviously put a lot of time and attention into making a profound case study on humanity, structured with subtle philosophical notes, without being heavy-handed. While it is felt that the writer should work on creating a stronger bridge between the Protagonist’s difficulties and his ‘necessity’ of exacting his revenge by trapping and torturing thieves, the characters represent the human spectrum well and the fast paced action scenes help lighten the heavy subject matter.
Somewhere Between Good and Evil is a stunning mix between Law Abiding Citizen and Office Space.
The script is a compelling thriller that offers a sharp treatise on survival in the modern, corporate world. The writer nimbly explores this cumbersome topic, while delivering a story that is clean and concise. Furthermore, the script has a great balance of dialogue, action, suspense, sexual tension, and depth of content. While improvements can be made, the script is a thought-provoking case study on a blossoming concern in the modern world.
The concept is the highlight of the script. The writer obviously put a lot of time and attention into making a profound case study on humanity, structured with subtle philosophical notes, without being heavy-handed. While it is felt that the writer should work on creating a stronger bridge between the Protagonist’s difficulties and his ‘necessity’ of exacting his revenge by trapping and torturing thieves, the characters represent the human spectrum well and the fast paced action scenes help lighten the heavy subject matter.
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