Talentville Mini-Coverage for Altered

ALTERED is a science-fiction thriller that explores the themes of regret and self-reliance. THE FIRM meets LOOPER.

The concept of the piece is compelling once it is fully established. However there are many confusing points for the reader, both in terms of character and story. The first 40-or-so pages are difficult to read, as the writer does not clearly set up the rules of the universe(s) occupied. The story picks up around page 60, and the last 40 pages are a breeze. There are some solid moments peppered throughout the screenplay, including the romance between the two main characters, and the main characters’ emotional growth throughout. With revisions, ALTERED could be a thoroughly entertaining read.