Talentville Mini-Coverage for Haloes on the Moon

Overall this script is an ambitious yet unsatisfying tale. There are some imaginative elements here but they’re not integrated into the narrative with enough depth, creativity, or strong moments...this script has all the raw materials for an interesting movie however the commercial potential of an inward looking western drama does not portend to do well at the box office. By placing this in a similar setting thematically, such as modern day Appalachia, or another rural, isolated setting would open up the possibility of making this story appealing to a wider audience.