Talentville Mini-Coverage for Murder at Rattlesnake Springs

Overall, MURDER AT RATTLESNAKE SPRINGS has some interesting pieces worth developing, but doesn't possess the mystery, drama or compelling romance to carry an entire film...The opening act promises some interesting mystery, but it takes a bit too long to get into the heart of the mystery-we have to presume that Jenny's disappearance is ill-intentioned, but there is never a clear clue as to what the tone of this disappearance is. There needs to be stronger choices made in the opening act to set the tone and what exactly is at stake...Overall, the writing is pretty clean and tight in terms of language, but the dramatic choices for plot need to be much stronger and more adventurous.